“On Top”

I haven’t written poetry in awhile, so here’s another attempt at it.  My theme this month is “patience,” and it’s a great prompt for an erotic poem, don’t you think?

Hope you enjoy,

eden

“On Top”

I climb on top
Straddle
Your hardness
Between my legs

Palpable
Throbbing
Ready

Lower myself
Anticipate
The push
To copulate

You tease
Make me wait
Frustrate

Swivel hips
Lubricate
Gyrate
Finally
Penetrate

You cradle me
Stroke
Fondle
Play

I grab my breasts
Entice
Pinch
Squeeze

Can’t slow down
Bounce
Thrust
Grind

Can’t wait
Shake
Tremble
Breathless

Can’t stop
Accelerate
Too late
Coming
Convulse
Coming
Ejaculate
Coming
Saturate
Coming

Eventually
Deflate

Breathe
Await

Fill me
Once more

Breathe
Await

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25 Comments

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25 responses to ““On Top”

  1. Jason Darrick

    Whether poetry or prose, you capture the essence beautifully, Eden.

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  2. You do have a way with words! I enjoyed!

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  3. A seductive sexy delicious treat! Thank you, Eden 🙂

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  4. Narendra

    Enjoyed that very much!!

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  5. Beautiful, the pace matched the action perfectly!

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  6. Raisa

    Wow….that made me feel….well, it made me feel.

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  7. I love this. That’s all I have to say.

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  8. Mmm! No wasted words – the essence of the art of poetry… and of lovemaking.

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  9. L.M. Stull

    oh my…

    love, Love, LOVE this!

    ha.

    Great job, my friend!

    Lisa 🙂

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  10. Oh, this was lovely to read, Eden!!
    Thanks for posting : )
    -Eva

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  11. Smooth slow, the words flowed.
    Sexy, enticing, the whole thing excites me.
    The moment was well said, and reading it was time well spent.

    Love it!

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  12. Very hot! Wow! I’ll have to visit here more often. This kind of thing could be a part of spicing up my wife’s and my love life. You have a new follower! 😉

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